Using Adjective
Clauses
(#13):
Avoid
these Mistakes!
Part
4
We have seen that you should
be careful about
several possible types of errors
with
adjective clauses. Here are two more things
to avoid:
1. Be careful with
punctuation.
Do not use commas with restrictive adjective
clauses.
Some adjective clauses give
information which
is necessary in specifically
identifying
nouns. These clauses are restrictive. Other adjective clauses
give information
which provides extra
information, but which is
not necessary in specifically identifying nouns. These clauses are nonrestrictive.
Use commas with nonrestrictive adjective clauses. Do
not use commas with restrictive
adjective clauses.
Examples
Do you know the *pages, which
we're supposed to read tonight?
wrong: The adjective clause is needed to show which pages are being talked about.
A comma should not be
used.
Do you know the pages which
we're supposed
to read tonight? (right)
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Joe has a *watch, which once
belonged to his grandfather.
wrong:
The
adjective clause is needed to show which
watch is being talked about.
A comma
should not be used.
Joe has a watch which once
belonged to his grandfather. (right)
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Dr. *Schnabel who teaches
my physics class was born in Germany.
wrong: The adjective clause is not needed
to show which person is being talked about because
the name makes this clear. Two commas should be
used.
Dr. Schnabel, who teaches
my physics class, was born in Germany. (right)
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Bob's *wife who is a nurse
is named
Gloria.
wrong:
Because Bob has only one wife,
the information is extra. Here, a comma should
be used.
Bob's wife, who is a nurse,
is
named Gloria. (right)
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Bob's sister who is a nurse
is named
Angie.
right:
If Bob
has more than one sister, this sentence
is correct.
Bob's sister, who is a nurse,
is named Angie.
right:
If Bob
has only one sister, this
sentence is
correct.
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2. Do not use that
in nonrestrictive
adjective clauses. Instead,
use which.
In restrictive adjective clauses,
both that and who can be
used to refer to people, and both
that and which can be used to refer to things. This is not true
for nonrestrictive adjective clauses, however:
that cannot be used. Instead,
use who or which.
Examples
The professor who teaches
my physics class was born in Germany.
(right)
The professor that teaches
my physics class was born in Germany. (right)
Dr. *Schnabel, that teaches
my physics
class, was born in Germany. (wrong)
Dr. Schnabel, who teaches
my physics class, was born in Germany. (right)
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/P>
Gerunds are verbs which are
used as nouns.
(right)
Gerunds are verbs that are
used as nouns.
(right)
Gerunds, that are verbs which
are used as
nouns, end in -ing. (wrong)
Gerunds, that are verbs that
are used as
nouns, end in -ing. (wrong)
Gerunds, which are verbs that
are used as
nouns, end in -ing. (right)
Gerunds, which are verbs which
are used as
nouns, end in -ing. (right)
Note: The second which
in the
sentence above is correct but awkward;
for
variety, that should be used
instead
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